Asymmetry

I’ll never be the

same again, was

I ever the same

before

Before

the same I

ever was will again

be never no more

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  1. William - Primitive Poetry Avatar
    William – Primitive Poetry

    Love the structure…brings forth the cyclical nature of it like you could repeat this over and over in waves

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    1. Tom Kael Avatar
      Tom Kael

      Thank you! Still repeating it right now. It’s my new counting sheep.

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      1. William - Primitive Poetry Avatar
        William – Primitive Poetry

        Looks like you e created your own breathing technique for lowering heart rate then!

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      2. Tom Kael Avatar
        Tom Kael

        Fingers crossed it works

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